Film Evaluation

Evaluation – By Chantelle Walker  

 

During this project, I produced an interactive video with audio that was accompanied by research, planning and contextual analysis along with attempts of problem solving throughout. Along with making an interactive came a lot of preparation. While planning my film, I had to create a storyboard, draft script, a pitch for my film and other pieces of written work that helped to make my film making process more smooth. While doing this project I also kept a production log which allowed me to document all the work I had completed in the weeks and gave me the opportunity to evaluate my work as I went along.  

 When coming up with an idea for my film I struggled coming up with something which I felt would allow me to show off my skills and have a great overall look. I made a mind map that was full of different ideas. I finally decided on the idea of doing a film that involved two girls who, like many people today, spend a majority of their time taking photos of places and mainly themselves. The concept of my film was to show people that in this generation we are blinded by technology. Many things around the world happen and even straight in front of us, yet we might not of even realised because we are fixated with our phones and don’t actually look up. I wanted to highlight this issue as I think it’s very relevant to most people.  

 In preparation of our interactive videos we all sat together and watched many different short interactive videos that were all different genres. This helped show what interactive videos were all about and how they are structured. This was also very helpful in our project because it allowed me to understand how to get across a message in a short amount of time and for it to be meaningful and clear to the audience. Throughout the whole project I always went back and viewed different interactive videos to help remind myself what I needed to do to make the theme and message bold. As well as watching videos we got set two essays which we had to complete in order to give us more help and understanding of the project. One of the essays was an interactive media essay. In this essay we had to discuss traditional and new media along with interactive media and the advantages and disadvantages of them all. Researching these helped with the project as it gave me a real insight into to the different media types and what audience they appeal too. The second essay was a film sound essay. For this we had to research the main sound types which included foley, atmos, and sound effects. We then had to analyse these sound in two chosen films. This research helped as it gave me a better understanding into the importance of sound also what type of sounds to use when creating a certain atmosphere.  

 Within the duration of my project I did encounter some problems. One of the issues I faced was planning times too film with my actors when they were both free, this having to also coincide with the weather. I did not want to film when it was raining because this would have a major effect on the audio and is not what I had planned. One of my actors was in school and the other actor went to college. I figured the best time to film was after college and school had finished. Due to me and one of my actors having work on the weekend it made it more hard when it came to filming. However, we did overcome this and managed to get all the filming done in time with plenty of remaining time of the project to spend on editing. While filming the main block of the film, one of my actors fell ill. This meant that I had to adjust my storyline a bit in order to let her go home and rest and then to also to make her departure to seem like part of the film. I managed to do this rather easily and when watching the film back I believe you cannot notice any changes were made. Another problem was that when filming the first few opening scenes, it was a windy day. I did not think it was windy enough to have a big effect on the audio, but it did. I then decided to have the first half of my film with no dialogue in, instead I put in some sounds to make up for this. I was worried that it would look strange having the first half with no dialogue then the second half with lots of dialogue. But there was not much else I could of done unless I had more equipment with me.  

 Throughout this project I think my skills have improved. I especially believe my editing skills have been massively developed. Before this project I didn’t realise how much work does go in to editing and I now appreciate that it’s a lot of hard work. I am now able to include a certain piece of audio from one clip and overlay it over multiple clips to make the audio seem more interesting and edit in clips that make it look more appealing, as opposed to a whole shot for the duration of a conversation. Along with practical skills development I believe my organising skills have also improved during this project as we are the ones that needed to plan and arrange everything. I managed to get everything done and felt organised throughout the project.  

 In addition to this I also got a lot more comfortable with using the appropriate equipment. At first I wasn’t very confident knowing that I had to do all the filming and thought I would of struggled when it came to using the camera. What I noticed was that some of my scenes came out very clear and then some came out a bit blurry. Although I am more confident with the camera now, I still need to learn more about how to adjust it to fully suit what type of work I am doing. If I had learnt more before the project started I think my film would of came out better as all the scenes would have been clear and not blurry at all.  

 Along with all the research I did throughout the project, it helped to teach me what conventions are needed in films to attract and interest your target audience. For my film my target audience was 12 and over. I decided on this target audience because I felt it was appropriate for the content that was going to be involved in my film. I do think my film appeals to that target audience because I think my film is relatable to people of that age. It’s relatable because it’s what they are experiencing. My film involves mystery and drama which is what I think appeals to my target audience because it’s intriguing. I was hoping to make the audience feel like they are in the situation along with the characters, I want it to challenge them and make them question what they would do in that same situation.  

 With peer feedback that I got I am confident that I know what I need to do in order to improve next time. I got told that my filming was good and that the camera shots helped to involve the audience. Although my camera shots and angles were good, it was apparent that some of them did not flow into one another as smoothly as the rest. This is something that I would need to improve on, I would do this by being more careful and putting more thought into how I position my characters in order to make it look like it was all filmed in the same time frame. I got told that the storyline was clear and interesting. The choices were relevant to that situation. Another thing that I needed to improve on is the sound. Although the sounds I used were appropriate to what was being shown on screen at that time, some of the natural ambient sounds made the production look less professional.  

 I agree with all the feedback I got given. What I think I should of done different is that with the first few opening scenes I filmed them without a tripod. This became very clear as when showing the establishing shots they appeared unsteady. Although this could be fixed when editing I still know it’s something that I could of done better. Another thing that I wish I did was take equipment that allowed me to record voice overs and edited them in which would of let me block out the wind.  

I think the sound in my film is where I could make the biggest improvement. All the sound in my film is appropriate for what I have filmed but I was not impressed how they came out overall. At the beginning is when I particular did not like the sound. I was unsure on what music to put in the background and what else to put in to make it more interesting. In the second half I mainly kept all the original sounds in and think it worked really well.  

 Overall I am happy with how my film came out. I specifically like the scene where one of my characters woke up in the middle of the night and is looking at her-self in the mirror stressing over whether she has made the right decision. I used short clips to add together to build up the tension. I also like the lighting in this scene as it’s lit up by candles that she blows out at the end.  

 

 

 

 

 

Evaluation Of Sound

Unit 5 

Unit 5 has been a very beneficial project for me. It has deepened my knowledge on sound, teaching me the different types of sound and what they are used for. By doing the research into two films at the beginning of the project allowed me to understand how sound is used in films to better it and intrigue the audience. This then helped give me ideas of what I should do with sound when it comes to my film to ensure its made to the best of my ability.

I believe I did use all of the sound elements discussed in this unit, for example, dialogue, effects and ambient sound. Dialogue was the main sound element in my short film. The dialogue was used to tell the story and express how the characters were feeling. I believed the dialogue allowed the storyline to be clear and also allowed the audience to fully engage in the story and the problems the characters faced. I also used a lot of ambient sound, especially when it came to the outdoor scenes. The day I filmed these scenes landed on a very windy day which had a massive impact on the footage and the wind overpowered all the sound. To overcome this I made these scenes not have any dialogue meaning I had to rely on the acting and sound effects to show the story clearly. I added in natural outside ambient sound, for example wind and birds. I had completely turned down the real sound of the wind before I did so. I also added footsteps on the scenes where there are close ups of the characters feet. This did turn out good however I should of done more searching around to look for a sound effect of footsteps that would of fit in with the characters feet more along with the surroundings. Despite this I do believe the ambient sounds that I added in added a feel of realism that made the scenes more believable.

The main difficulty that I encountered during this project was the effect the wind had on my footage. My original plan was to have dialogue all throughout my film, including the scenes that I filmed outside. The wind however did not allow  this to happen. To overcome this I decided to film the outside scenes with no dialogue in at all. Once I had filmed the scenes I had to then go and find sounds to fit in the scenes to make them look real.

I feel my sound mix did successfully fulfil the overall mood I was hoping to convey. I wanted to put across the tension and dilemma the characters were facing, I feel I achieved this by the sounds I used. An example of this is when one of the characters is up throughout the night looking in her mirror, I used the sounds along with the camera shots to express her worries and it came out well. I could of done more searching around for sounds that would of exaggerated these feelings more therefore, next time I will put more time into finding the perfect sounds to give across the best look.

During this project I do feel that I spent most of my time getting the right footage and then editing it together. I could of used more time when it came to making my sound mix. If I had left myself more time to create my sound mix that it would of enabled me to find more appropriate sounds that worked better with my footage. I did have enough time to put a sound mix together, despite this I could of done with more time in order to make it better than what it was. In future I feel I need to plan my project more carefully and ensure that I follow my time plan in order to allow myself to have equal amount of time to spend on each part of the project to ensure that every aspect is done to the best of my ability.

Throughout the process of editing sound I felt fairly confident when it came to putting it all together. I had previous experience when it came to editing sound due to one of the projects we had already done. As we were making our films on Premire Pro I felt fairly confident as I find it easy to use and have had many opportunities to use it and get use to how it all works, this included placing in sound on top of footage. The only issue that I did face when it came to editing the sound is that if I worked on a different laptop to the one I had downloaded my sounds on I would have to go and find them all over again and download them to the new laptop I was on. This was tricky as I found it hard remembering the names of all the sounds I had used. I overcame this by going back to the original laptop and logging down the names on the sounds.

Overall I did enjoy this experience as it allowed me to create my own film and bring it to life even more by including multiple sounds. If I were to do another project like this in the future I would spend more time researching different sounds making sure that I am using the best ones for my film. I would do more research into building up sound from footage with no sound what so ever in order to make it look completely real. In addition to do this I would chose my filming days more carefully to ensure that the wind would not massively impact the sound. Other than this there is not much that I would change. I am overall happy with my final project.

 

Production Log

Week One ( 11th December )

This week we got given the brief for our new project which is called ‘ Revolution ‘. We then had to annotate the brief. This was to help us gain a better understanding of the task we were being set and to point out any points that we might struggle with. Also this week we had to start to think of ideas for our short films and start to mind map them. We had to come up with multiple choices to give us more of  a variety to chose from.

Week Two ( 18th December )

This week we had to come to a final decision on what we wanted our film to be based on. When we had our final idea we then had to write a synopsis for our idea. It took me a while to come to a final decision for my film but once I had I was very happy with what I had chosen. When coming up with an idea I struggled thinking of something that I really liked. I made a mind map with multiple ideas then asked other people for their opinion. It made me a lot more excited for this project and immediately I started to think about who I would include, what locations I would use and how I would make the story line plan out as a whole. Below is the link to my synopsis;

https://chantelle1010.wordpress.com/2017/12/19/short-film-synopsis/

Also this week we had to make a mood board that expressed all the different ideas and topics that we associate with the media revolution.

Week Three ( 8th January )

In this week we had already came up with a film idea and now had to make a pitch to show to the class. The pitch had to consist of our film synopsis, our film locations, and all the other key factors that we needed to consider when making a film. As well as making a pitch we also got given another task which was to create multiple mood boards which expressed what tone we wanted to set for our films. The mood boards also had to include pictures of equipment that we might need and also pictures that showed what camera angles I might use when shooting my film.

Once our pitch was finished we all had to present them to the class. We then got given feedback on our pitch which helped us too improve our work and fix things that were unclear and needed more work put into.

I then wrote up a short evaluation on the feedback I had been given, describing what I had been told to do to improve and what my next steps were.

Week Four ( 15th January )

This week we had to ensure that we were all confident with our ideas and had a clear synopsis which allowed us to show that we had full understanding of our films narrative. This synopsis had to be put on our blogs. This week we also got set a task that was completely separate from our revolution task. We all had to individually create a stop motion animation. This animation only needed to be 15 seconds long. Before we began to make our animations we all got given an emotion that we were meant to show in our films. The emotion that I got was fear. My animation ended up being around 40 seconds long which was unexpected but when making it i feel that if i had made the story any shorter it would not of made sense.

Week Five ( 2nd January )

In this week we had to make a test product. For our test product we got given a storyline that we had to bring to life. We went off in groups of three – four. One person from the group had to be the actor while the other two did the filming. Before we went off to film we had to create a shotlist. Thus was so we could go out and film knowing exactly what had to be done, this way it took less time and made us more confident in all the process. We also had to make a a draft script. This was to make our storyline more clear to ourselves. The draft script will really help when it comes to storyboarding.

Week Six ( 29th January )

We were now nearing the time when we needed to start filming. Before we can film we need to storyboard our idea to make it more easier for ourselves when we come to filming. When doing a story board we had to document every scene and write about who will be in the scene and where the scene is taking place.

I only did one storyboard as I was happy with the outcome. However, I should of done more than one which would of allowed me to compare them and let me see which one works best and is more clear. In future this is what I will do.

As well as doing a storyboard we also had to plan when we were going to start shooting scenes for our film. Following my production schedule I asked my actors which day worked best for them. Luckily my filming was quite flexible and didnt need to be filmed at a very specific time of day, this was until the last few scenes which did have specific times that they needed to be filmed.

Week seven ( 5th February )

This week I started to film. I managed to get all of the opening scenes done which I was happy about. The day I chose to film on was very dry and sunny but was quite windy. Although I didn’t think the wind was that bad, when reviewing my footage the wind was very overpowering. The scenes did have some dialogue in which was an issue. Instead of getting the actors to redo the scenes I decided to crop out the parts where they spoke and decided too keep the first half silent and add in all the sound effects.

Week Eight ( 19th February )

This week I met up with my actors again to finish of the filming. I managed to get most of the filming done this day however, when filming, one of my actors was ill which meant that she was not able to stay as long as needed. For this reason I had to do a slight change to my story which allowed her to leave the film with with it all fitting in. In the end this actually worked out fine and all the scenes I had done worked really well today.

Some of the scenes were set in the night time and some were set in the morning so i had to arrange dates when my other actor was free. We got the night scenes done one evening and I still have just one scene left to do which is set in the morning. I have planned to do this on the weekend which allows me to come into the final week with everything I need.

I also started editing this week. I have edited all my film up to the point where we need to edit in the two endings. I am currently confident with my position and feel I will most defiantly get all my work complete by the end of next week.

Week Nine ( 26th February )

This week mainly consists of us making sure we have completed all the work that was set and that our films were completed and ready to be uploaded to Youtube. I feel I am currently in a very comfortable place and do believe that I have everything done. My main priority is putting my film on my blog then completing my evaluation. In order to do my evaluation I need to show some of my peers my film so that they can give me feedback which I can put in my evaluation.

 

Draft Script

Scene   Where   When   Who   What  
1  Field in  

Madron  

Early afternoon   Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe )  

Walking through the field having general conversations  
2  Field in Madron   Early afternoon   Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

Finding the abandoned building deciding whether to go in or not 
3  abandoned building   Afternoon   Two main characters ( Shannon and Phoebe )   Looking around the abandoned building  
4  Abandoned building   Afternoon   Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

 

Taking pictures of each other posing around the place  
5  Field   Later afternoon  Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

The girls leave the abandoned building and head back to one of their houses 
6  Bedroom  Evening   Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

Walking into room with camera showing various photos of the girls and their other friend together  
7  Bedroom   Evening   Two main actors  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

Sit down on bed and get the laptop up, putting stick with photos into it  
8  Bedroom   Evening   Two main characters  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

We now see the girls flicking through the photos, shots showing them and the computer  
9  Bedroom   Evening   Two main 

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

The realization of what they have found, they know it is their friend  
10  Bedroom   Evening   Two main  

( Shannon and Phoebe ) 

Now it’s the dilemma in which the girls have to discuss whether or not to go to the police or keep it quiet  
11  Screen       This is when the audience get to choose where the story goes by either choosing option A or option B  
12  Option A –  

Living room 

Night   One of the girls  

  • Phoebe  
This girl is being shown on the phone to the police reporting what has happened 
13  Option A  

Bedroom  

Morning   One of the girls  

  • Phoebe  
The girl gets woken up to the sound of her phone going off, she has received a text from her friend saying that the person has been arrested and that their friend is in trouble    
14  Option B   Morning   One of the girls 

  • Phoebe   
She gets woken up to a text on her phone from her friend saying that her other friend has been taken to hospital because she has taken the drugs which turned out to make her really ill 

 

Project Metric

Positives

Personal Strengths

Negatives

Personal Weaknesses

Time (how long have you got?) 9 weeks

along with holidays

Christmas hols – 2 weeks

February half term – 1 week

I am not retaking maths or English which allows me to completely focus on this project and no more work. I have done filming before and enjoyed it. I have a job which takes us some of my own time which I would dedicate to this project.
Cost (do you have a budget?) At the moment I do not have a budget. I am hoping that whatever I focus my short film on, I will have a lot of the equipment already. If there are things that I need to get for my short film I am defiantly willing to go out and get them. I may not find things that I am looking for, therefore this may cause a problem. To overcome this I will have to find a substitute object.
Resources (how much time are you spending on the project, what resources do you have? Need?) We are spending 9 weeks on the project. I am unsure what I am going to need for my short film, so at the moment, knowing what I need is unclear.
Scope (what is the scope of the project?) The project is interactive. The film will have two different endings which the audience can decide how it ends. I can use previous media texts to help with my projects. It might be difficult coming up with two equally good endings that completely show the two different possible outcomes.
Quality (What are your quality aspirations?  How long, complex are you planning the narrative to be?  Are you willing to fix quality problems?) I am aiming for my narrative to be very descriptive. I want the message to come across very clearly. If there are any problems I will fix them. I am willing to do a lot of research to help with my understanding of my chosen storyline. I may struggle with ensuring that my film is very clear and easy to understand so this is what I have to keep in mind when making it.
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Film Sound Essay

 

In this essay I will be discussing the different types of sounds/ audio that is used within all films and other media texts. Audio within film is crucial when it comes to creating the overall feeling and atmosphere of a specific scene. Without sound it’s almost impossible to make the ensure that the audience will fully interact with the film. In addition to this, audio is also important when it comes to sticking to particular genre conventions. Examples of this being that with horror films people expect there to be eerie music in order to make them feel more scared. There are five main types of sounds that help to create the perfect audio for a film, these include, foley, atmos, SFX, music and dialogue.

Foley sound: Foley sound is the reproduction of everyday sound effects that are added to film, video, and other media in post-production to enhance audio quality. These reproduced sounds can be anything from the swishing of clothing and footsteps to squeaky doors and breaking glass. Foley allows the film makers to have complete control over timing, quality, and relative volume of the sound effects. It also allows the film makers to make sure that the dialogue is recorded and heard as clearly as possible without any interruptions from the natural ambient sound in the scene. Once the dialogue is done to perfection this is then when foley sound is added in. This then means the scene is finished to expectations.

SFX: Special effects are artificially created or enhanced sounds, or sound processes used to emphasize artistic or other content of films, television shows, live performance, animation, video games, music, or other media. Sounds effects are very important when it comes to making films as they help to create the illusion. By this I mean the special effects help towards making the scene seem more real. This could be from simply adding in conversations into the background of a scene that’s being filmed in a café or to the extreme of adding explosion sound effects to a war scene.

Atmos: This sound is relating to the ambient sound within films. Ambient sound is the background sound within a scene. Common ambient sounds include wind, water, birds, crowds, office noises, traffic Atmos sound enhances the idea of what you are watching is real and true. In theory ambient sound can be diegetic and non-diegetic. Sometimes the natural sounds within the background are used as they fit with what is going on in that scene and sometimes background sound is added in, in order to make the scene appear more real.

Music: Music within a film or any kind of media text, is key when creating the atmosphere and expressing the emotion that is wanted to be felt. Non-diegetic sound is sound that is not heard within the film world. This meaning that the music is added in post-production. Diegetic sound is sound that is played within the film world. This meaning that the sound or music is being played the same time as everything is being filmed, so the actors and production team all hear the music or sound when the camera is rolling.

Dialogue: Dialogue is a conversation that happens between two people. This can be both diegetic and non-diegetic. It explains plot, creates character development, and allows the audience to have form a bond with the characters. Creating a bond with characters is one of the main aims when it comes to creating the characters and portraying them. If the audience do not connect with the characters then it will be hard for them to relate to the film and want to keep watching.

The first film which I have chosen to analyse is Wall E by Andrew Stanton. It was released in 2008, by which audio had improved massively along with animation. The film is based on two robots. The film overall has very minimal dialogue. The first 30 minutes of the film go without any narrative or dialogue as they entirely focused on Wall-E himself. Within these first scenes with Wall-E we learn so much about his character singly from hearing sounds that he makes, also along with music that helps to us the audience how he is feeling and what he is thinking. Foley sound is especially used within this film as the overall aim was to create a robot that’s realistic which allows the audience to connect and empathise with. The director did do this simply by using sounds that really bought him to life. Examples of these sounds include clunking metal, for when Wall-E moves and then electrical sounds that are used to express his feelings and his thoughts. Through simple noses like this, the audience are able to fully understand the what is going on. In this film, a lot of emotion seems to be drawn out of something simple. This also relates to sound effects. The film as a whole is equally made up with sound effects and music.

There is however some dialogue within the film. This dialogue sometimes consists of two people having a conversation but then it also consists of the two robots having a conversation. This conversation however involves one talking robot and one non-talking robot.  Rather than write in WALL-e’s beeps and tones, Stanton wrote dialogue for what each of those beeps meant to convey.

Many different songs were used within this film to help set the atmosphere of a specific scene. Whether this is exaggerating the feeling of upset or to help show the romancer between two characters in the film. Thomas Newman’s score plays on this balance with mischievous melodies in Axiom, contrasted by the swell of romantic notes in scenes between WALL-E and Eve. Furthermore, consider the film’s use of Hello Dolly’s “Put On Your Sunday Clothes”- the song encapsulates our hero’s desire for more than his “hick town” to discover “there’s lots of world out there”.

The second film I have decided to write about is The Dark Knight 2008 by Christopher Nolan. I have decided to analyse the sound in this film because it is a great example of good use of different audio including music, dialogue, diegetic and non- diegetic sound and sound effects. All are included within the film and are all used to great standards. Music especially is used within the film to help set the tone for the scene. For example, in the beginning scenes when events get interrupted by the joker leading one of the main characters, Rachel, gets captured by him, putting great distress on Batman. The music in the background captures the emotion displayed in the scene. The music, for most of the scene, is rather minimal. There is a droning sound in the background while the Joker is threatening Rachel. It is an unnerving sound that grows louder and mimics the growing tension throughout the scene. When Batman arrives, percussion and stringed instruments liven the pace of the music and the drives the action that is happening during the encounter.

Many sound effects were used throughout the film to help bring the scenes to life. The sound effects made the scenes more believable and came across more realistic to the audience. This then helped to encourage the audience to connect with the characters and truly believe their performances. For example, the bat mobile needed to have a sound that fit it perfectly allowing it to live up to the expectations of the audience. To create the sound used for the bat mobile the film crew recorded the sound of big race boat engines, adding large animal roars and growls for emphasis. This then gave the bat mobile its signature sound. There are many other sound effects which helped contribute to giving scenes more of a signature sound. In the famous scene where the joker blows up the hospital, its full of sound effects. Some of these sounds include the sound of explosions to the simplicity of the sound of the button being pressed to help build up the tension.

Dialogue within this film is very crucial when it comes to understanding the narrative. The first scenes in the film prove this. There is a simple conversation going on in the car, this conversation quickly gives you an idea of what to expect for the rest of the film. It sets the tone for the rest of the film. There is also a speech near the end that perfectly ends the film making the audience feel they are certain with the events that have happened.

In conclusion, all the different types of sound used within film are equally important when it comes to setting the tone for the film and ensuring that the narrative is presented clearly to the audience. In the two films that I have discussed, if neither of them included the sound technology that they did then they most likely would not have been as successful as they were. This especially applies to Wall-E as the sound within this film is the key element.

Test Product

test product

Stalker Film –

To help us with our revolution product we did a test product. The reasoning behind this is the idea that it will give us experience when it comes to both filming and editing. The idea of the film was that a student was on the college campus which happened to be empty. This student then got the feeling that someone was watching them. This helped us with our own projects as we had to involve a phone with the text appearing on the screen which is what many of us are doing in our films. We had to chose our shots and camera angles very carefully to help create the feeling of loneliness and show clearly to the audience that someone is watching and following the student. We had to do all of the filming free hand which make some of the clips appear very wobbly. We did however, still get some great shots where we used equipment from around the college to help make a smoother shot, for example, we used a coat which helped us have a smooth pan shot. We also used one of the chairs to create a good tracking shot. This helped us to keep the camera more steady. One was sat on the chair filming it while the other pushed them. The shots that came out the least best were our establishing shots. We attempted to do a track and pan shot together to have a more skilled outcome. This proved to be quite difficult without any equipment.

Pitch Reflection

Presentation skills review

I have been given feedback both from my peers and lecturer. This feedback has been very helpful in helping me decide what I now need to do with my work and how to improve. From the feedback I know that I am confident with my idea and that I can present my idea very clearly. Im also confident that my idea comes across appealing and would interest people as from my feedback, many agreed that my idea would make a good interactive dramatisation.

Along with the positive feedback I had also been given constructive criticism. When presenting I did not go into much detail about the alternative endings. I need to ensure that my endings are clear and that i’m confident with them so that when it comes to making my film I will be able to get on with the filming smoothly.

Changes to my idea due to primary source research

After my feedback I know that my research and information on my idea was detailed enough for everyone to approve and be interested in, therefore i will not be making many changes to my idea as i am happy with the outcome of the feedback.

Step Outline

step by step outline

  • The two friends are walking through a field
  • come across an abandoned building
  • they are intrigued so decide to go and have a closer look
  • they enter the building and believe everything is fine so look in further
  • one of the girls ask the other to take photos of her posing in the building to show off where they are, and to get other peoples attention
  • the girl does multiple poses before she is happy with the results
  • the girls then head back to one of their houses
  • when back at the house the girls decide to flick through the photos
  • Whilst looking through the photos they realise there is two people in the background
  • as they zoom in they realise the two people are in the middle of a drug deal
  • While also zooming in they realise that one of the people in the background is actually one of their closet friends
  • they then have this dilemma of whether to speak to someone about it or just leave it
  • You can decide to report it to the police
  • or you can either keep it quite, ending with a bad outcome

If you chose the first option, this will happen:

  • The girls report the incident to the police
  • the police then look further into to what has happened
  • the police then end up arresting the guy who is dealing the drugs
  • their friend gets let off with a warning from the police but gets in big trouble with her parents

If you chose the second option, this will happen:

 

 

 

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